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Sweet Sue (Linny)

She has always been my big sister
We share together a wonderful memory
Emits a warmth that makes me smile
Eloquence is written into her poetry
Tells me what I need too hear

She is a loving and caring sister to me
Understands the struggles I go through
Elegance, love and perfection is what I see


Author notes

Linny, Thank you for always being there with advice when things go wrong. Though we don't always agree know I always love you and feel I was so lucky to have a big sister like you growing up to look up to. They were big shoes to fill and I guess I quite never made it. I love you. Lil sis Sandy                                                                
Written September 21st, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    September 23, 2005
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    WONDERFUL

    Thank you for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it. This was a wonderful contest. Take care, Sandy

  • heart on sleeve
    September 22, 2005
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    hey what a beautifully short and well worded poem a beautiful picture too, thanks for entering and good luck great poem one of my favourites so far i must say lol abigailxxx

  • Sandygram
    September 22, 2005
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    WONDERFUL CONTEST

    I am glad you enjoyed this. I meant it from my heart. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love you, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    September 22, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Melanie for the lovely comment. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Yes she is a wonderful sister. I hope all is well with you and your Mom and all your family. God Bless youTake care, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    September 22, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Sam for the lovely comment. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Yes she is a wonderful sister. I hope you have a great day. Take care, Sandy


  • luckynsincere
    September 21, 2005
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    This was beautiful and endearing. It shows the kindness of your soul... I love it Sandy.. What a touching tribute...
    Melanie

  • Linda Sue silver member
    September 21, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely poem, sis. It was a wonderful way to start the day....except for the tears. I know you're life hasn't been easy lately and I get very frustrated because I can't seem to help. I know you don't always appreciate my sisterly advice...but it comes from the heart. You have been so busy with your AP friends and family this past year that I am feeling a little disconnected. I miss our long weekly emails. One of these days, I'll find the time to expand my author's page....and post your sweet poem on it. Remember...just like when we were kids...I love you....no matter how annoyed we get with each other. ~ Love, Linny


  • Samplette gold member
    September 21, 2005
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    To have one such as this in your life is a true blessing. I am sure you mean as much to her. Very loving write.
    Sam


  • Sandygram
    September 21, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Shannon for the lovely comment . She is a wonderful sister. God Bless you. Sandy

  • Sandygram
    September 21, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Thank you so much Don, She is my real sister. She has always been there for me. I was always the little sister tagging along pestering her and her friends growing up. Thank you for the nice comment as always. Sandy God Bless you.
    Edited on Sep 21, 4:51 because ''.


  • Donjo1030
    September 21, 2005
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    excellent

    Beautiful Sandy!!!
    You have such a wonderful AP family that you love and care for dearly. I just love reading these writes about them they are always so refreshing and more poems about how we care about people close to us should be written. This has an excellent flow and tells us how wonderful linny is.
    BRAVO!!!!!!
    Edited on Sep 21, 4:52 because 'misspelling'.


  • beautifulbrat
    September 21, 2005
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    very beautiful

    aww Mom this is a beautiful piece i hope that your sister loves this piece as much as i do. keep up the good work Mom

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