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Masquerade of Lies

An Evanescent Variant
a Masquerade at night
Prismatic souls like Dragonflies
in Rapturous dark flight

Cascades of stars are in disguise
a Vibrant source of light
Abyssal fear and painful lies
hiding the healing sight

Author notes

Word bank poem written for a contest.
Written September 20th, 2005

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  • Estatic over him
    January 12, 2007
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    good. really good. short and sweet.

  • Sunshinegf
    February 18, 2006
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    I love this piece keep writing
    into the future thanks for
    shering your works on allpoetry.com


  • miranda writes
    September 22, 2005
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    I love how well you used those big words very well written piece-short and sweet...good luck in the contest~miranda~


  • this is all i am
    September 22, 2005
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    i love this, the words you use and the way you use them, you haev a great mind. love the imagery
    your friend
    emily


  • Dancing Fairy
    September 20, 2005
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    I loved how you used the wordbank , this poem has such emotion put in few words i love it, good luck in the contest

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