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Shadows (Haiku)

The shadows conceal
Everything which is not real
I'm hidden with them

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Written September 20th, 2005

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  • grannyeri gold member
    September 25, 2005
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    Shadows do make magic and create feelings and things which weren't there before.

  • dreaminoflife
    September 21, 2005
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    OOh now this is an interesting piece. kinda mysterious.