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I can go anywhere

I know everyone can get there,
I know everyone has been,
I know people share my feelings,
All they need to do is dream,

I don't need money, nor clothes nor food,
I don't need transport, nor control nor goods,

There's no one to judge me,
No one to stare,
I can be myself here,
I don't need to care,
This is my world, my place to scream,
This is my fantasy, my world my dream,

People can talk without speaking words,
People can listen without using ears,
People can laugh and scream and share,
People can come here if they dare,

This my very own little world,
Somewhere to fly without using wings,
I can go to Spain, or Crete or Greece,
This is my place where we can meet.


Author notes

I know this doesn't egsactly fit into what you asked for, but seens there's no rules I thought it would probrably be accepted. I know it could of sounded better but this is the only place I truly feel I can be myself and enjoy myself to the full. Thanks for reading and please comment.
Written September 20th, 2005

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  • Elvenfairy
    September 21, 2005
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    it is very much accepted! I was wondering wether anyone was going to enter something like this! Thanks for entering my contest!