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Was It....

I smiled
at your pink shirt
as you laughed your way
down the halls today.
Opening my mouth
to say a hello
that never came out.
What was that about?
After school
when you grinned at us
as we wandered down the halls.
Why did I pause?
We were eating
and you laughed,
looking our way.
What did you say?
Was it me you saw
when you smiled
as we wandered past together?
Or was it her?

Author notes

A.J. god, is he hot!!!!! lol. well he's really cute, new kid my friend and i both like. ughh.... they always end up liking Melissa, shes so much prettier!!!!
- Love u Moe!
Written September 20th, 2005

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  • singer in the rain
    October 25, 2006
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    ILI :f

    OMG JULIA I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!!! and i totally think your poem is super hillarious while being serious at the same time...BUT ITS GREAT [[duh]] like always

  • leadingthelemings
    September 21, 2005
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    he wore a pink shirt over a white one yesterday, with khaki shorts. god, it was cute!!!!! lol. some guys look really bad in pink, but not A.J.... lol. Mika says she thinks he likes Melissa though, so i give up. makes me sad.


  • DarkTear
    September 20, 2005
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    aaw how cute... horrible poem. really. terrible. im jk.. anyway... ur super cute bf wears pink?!? wow...
    Edited on Sep 21, 2:22 p.m. because ''.