Yesterday night I ate pizza.
Tomorrow night I will eat pasta.
Now, I wonder-
Really, I ponder,
Why do I eat so much mozzarella?
Author notes
Written September 20th, 2005 <--- xD not really
In sixth grade, my social studies teacher (Mrs. Chell) gave us a poetry assignment. She gave us a bunch of pictures for inspiration, and told us to use them or write about European cultures (something like that). I wrote a whole bunch, which she collected and never handed back to us. This is an attempt at recreation of one of those poems, and a failed attempt, as my poem was about excessive cheese-grating o.O
Other similar attempts:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4604425
http://allpoetry.com/poem/1620329
A contest entry
- For Your Eyes Only by angelfire81.
300 points, ended September 27, 2005, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
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What did you think
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Lol
That's funny. Good write.
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Judged-ola!
haha cute write -
This is cute, and a nice change from all the serious and angst-filed entries I have been reading. Sounds like an awfully good poem for a sixth grader, and it made me smile.
Congratulations on the trophy and thanks for entering my contest! -
I love that cheese
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hahahaha that's so cute!
interesting question. i shall ponder~!
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Umm wow this just makes me all the more happier that I am allergic to dairy
However I doubt you are really or was really thinking that when you was eating the pizza -
i agree.
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because it tastes good.
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critical
very random, and that is why i loved it!!!! -
totally irrelevant and totally wonderful. Yes why do you eat so much mozzarella? I eat lots of feta personally, but what is it with you and the moz? hehe nice one! xxx
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