You, my dream pillow
Oh God as I
am closing my eyes
my pillow I spy
your curves, oh my.
I lost my pillow
embracing another man oh
where did she go
while forsaking me so.
My companion, pillow, soft
I regret leaving too
smooth to my toss
fetching as passions grew.
My companion, smelling sweet
smooth and nakedly cool.
Your silk upon cheek
asleep you gently rule.
I lay upon ground
but my head awaits
rustling to cushions found
sweet companion to sate.
My face pushes who
I clutch to slide.
You push me too
into her softness hide.
My best sweet dreams
even belly button dimple
are within your seams
blushing a modest pimple.
Were I to peruse
I could not recreate
all my dreams use
of your soft grace.
I lost you, pillow
firm but softly turned
so soft and willow.
Your touch I yearn.
by Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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I dream of my lost my pillow. More and more muse.
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Ahhh
The softness is you
plush, lush and welcoming
who I come to
You make me sing.
Orpheus -
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sorry, haven't been on for a while.. just got the net hooked up at our new apartment. we are also leaving on thursday for
florida..helping out with storm recovery, ect..money stinks up here big time..can make more there..get bills paid while we are there by wiring it up here to my account and that kind of thing. ted and i will be gone for a month..don't worry. we have places to go..ted's stepmom, 2 sisters, 2 brothers and grandmother all live down there..we will be working most of the time but i am sure that we will have fun too.
love ya,
tanya -
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i loved the metaphore here.... lovely, and smart... -
lol...the pillow is a great metaphor..really nice done..it makes me smile..(i want a fluffy pillow too!..lol)..nice job
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Okay this totally made me smile!! Now I understand the comment you left on my poem! haha! I tend to find that my pillow is way to hard...but hey I love my teddy!
! Thank you so much for your comment!!!!
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awesome job! I really like
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Yup
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Excellent metaphor. I enjoyed this soft sensual poem... You've done well wth it. Good luck.
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Oh, amazigh, some alternate pillows are just worth the hard ground other times! Wink!
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Belissimo and billion blessing from SWEETPIL
You can never lost your pillow ,it's still in your heart try to find it Amazigh -
lovely
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Aw. Indeed a profound pillow! I loved it friend
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the magic pillow
Original write of a pillow with all the qualities of comfort
to sleep and dreams , good luck , -
hmm pillow LOL..THAT sounds like good real pillow youtalking abot here Abdul..this was great and very well written..again i like yor playful way with words..good luck
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Wonderful!
Wow this is great! Lovely pillow poem and this portrays so much loveliness and and just too bad you lost that pillow! lol.... Find it please! You have to get it for all the wonders that it shares and gives you, it can not be replaced!
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this poem is wonderfully expressive.. pillow talk says a lot when your lonely ..lol..Linda
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Very nice!
Great poem, I love this one too. -
lol amazing, find that pillow!
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