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Cayman peace

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embraced by the sea
psychedelic hues swim near
peace reigns deep within

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This picture was taken on a dive in the Caymans this August. It is so beautiful and peaceful under the sea. Yes....there are stingrays swimming around us.
Written September 20th, 2005

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  • RoaringLioness1
    September 24, 2005
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    very good

    love the picture..the haikus was cool also. good luck on the contest...


  • Forms of Me
    September 23, 2005
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    This is a really nice Haiku. I love the picture. I find myself really enjoying any writing which is accompanied by a personal image such as this one. You have captured this so well within such a short form. Great work.


  • Hawk Feather
    September 22, 2005
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    What a nice haiku teach! I love it. I like the picture too. ^_^ Keep up the good work! Good luck in the contest!

  • dreaminoflife
    September 21, 2005
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    Thanks for sharing the neat picture. I enjoyed your haiku.


  • Donjo1030
    September 21, 2005
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    excellent

    Very well done Joanne!!
    This an excellent haiku that reads so nice, shows a wonderful picture of your vacation and how much you love to dive.
    Good luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!
    BRAVO!!!!!!

  • Linda Sue silver member
    September 20, 2005
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    A lovely vacation and a lovely haiku. I enjoy reading haikus...they say so much in a few words. Very nice. Great picture! ~ Blessings ~ Sue


  • Vickie J
    September 20, 2005
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    Wow!!! I do admire you for the wonderful vacations you take. It's absolutely beautiful. Lovely haiku to compliment the picture!!!

  • isabel
    September 20, 2005
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    Good Write

    I agree that it is really cool how you managed to use the word psychedelic. Haikus take real talent to write. good write!


  • Sherry gold member
    September 20, 2005
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    Great poem and picture of you both and a lovely read. Nicely done my friend. Sherry ♥


  • Anna Emkah
    September 20, 2005
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    Beautiful Haiku and a beautiful picture. Very nice all together. Well done. Anna.


  • Autumn Whisper
    September 20, 2005
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    good haiku thelordreigns, funky pic too and a good word there,
    psychedelic! nice one
    best of luck in the contest
    best wishes
    Shimmering River

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