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Hearts at Sea

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He holds her in his arms
wishing to never let her go
breeze on the ocean
flowing softly thru her hair

A lovers ride
on the ocean wide
smooth and quiet
two hearts become one

As they head
for a romantic hideway
a couples paradise
on an island faraway

No need for a minister
no quests or license
as they marry under the stars
with Mother Nature as there witness

~Lady Raven~

Author notes

A boat ride to paradise
Two hearts upon an ocean
wide and smooth
and never ending


I saw this pic and the title popped into my head.  I love romance novel pics.
Written September 20th, 2005

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  • Fairy Moon
    September 20, 2005
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    Wow! I will have to come back to write a better comment. I am not in a loving mood.. and this poem reminds me of that. ~~Shannon~~


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    September 20, 2005
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    this poem is simply stunning!
    I love reading this one
    Love yah
    Angel


  • TourniquetofBlood
    September 20, 2005
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    This is very grand, my dearest mummy. I saw everything as it was described...as if I were there. I think you are officially my mommy and that we have one mind. lol j/k


    Your AP so-in-law
    Adrien


  • Cemetery Rose
    September 20, 2005
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    I loooove the second stanza!


  • robert bolin
    September 20, 2005
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    This is a very beautiful poem the penning is exsquisit and very
    Enchanting, and the coment just added to the emotions of this poem, Your heart and your soul are telling the reader on this vacation you will be delighting your self in the beautiful serenity of natures quilt...this is a brilliantly penned poem what could I do without my angel..

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