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Forbidden Love

I have this love,
This love that seems to be forbidden
Some say forbidden love is the strongest
But why does it make me feel so weak?
I try so hard to get rid of this love, that makes me so weak
But without it, I feel this weakness grow
So, I run to this love for strength
When I am wrapped in this forbidden love,
I feel safer than I ever would

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Written September 20th, 2005

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  • Ravenic Seraphim
    April 29, 2007

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    very Beautiful I like it, Thank you for entering it...
    Its Short and sweet but to it's point...

    Blessed be!

    Dream