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still untitled.. oh well

Are you excited
we're about to start a war
fire with fire, passion with passion
and oh so much more
'Cause that's just what I do...

seductive and angry,
it's all in the name of lust,
I'll keep on writing your name with dust,
stealing my kisses right back fromt the start,
then I'll start again

don't know where I'm goin honey
don't know if I'll stop
i'm catching up, running past
you don't need to watch

Is the liquid metal running to your head
as my hands reach up onto your chest
and I'm crying out, screaming loud
looking up and lying down
It's just what I do...

we're all just the same
like a circle in a crimson maze
but there's a darker haze
I think I'm going out my mind.

there's something you don't know baby
something I won't tell
going to give your lips a secret
then put it down a wishing well.

so this has got me, you know,
thinking abotu a few more things
those soft kisses, hopeful hugs and oh, that diamond ring
it kinda makes me wonder
if those pigs have wings
and then i wonder: why say these sorta things
so i'll just sing

yeahh hey yeah hey hey
don't think you're in the sky
my promises can lie

yeahh hey yeah hey hey
you cannot rush a spidersweb
what was it you think I said

yeahh hey yeah hey yeah
gonna crash your mind
'cause you put your heart on the line

Author notes

hey guess what it's STILL not finished. and the part where its talking abotu the pigs... its spoken lol
Written September 20th, 2005

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  • kibitz
    September 21, 2005
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    smeebly ... note to self: use smeebly in any conversation from this point forward.

  • kibitz
    September 21, 2005
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    heheyeahh its ufnny how that came about, cos i wasnt even thinking about it but i was rememebvring the time i broke the red backs spider web and i felt bad tbut then i relaise dit bit me so i just went to kill it and i was walking abck from school and then i came on here and iw as like: whoah that liek what i was thinking and yeah. coinkydinky .. i unhhh its osudns kool wen u say it! hah

  • trippy-coocoo
    September 21, 2005
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    SMEEBLY

    love it

    Libb*

  • tamilosophy
    September 20, 2005
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    tastyful

    hehe spidersweb

    love the incorporated speaking

    speaking is goood