lately i've been so tired,
so weak and uninspired.
it's hard to go on, day by day.
shit keeps goin wrong, but i say it's all okay.
no idea what i'm doin with my life.
right now, i'm just livin by the knife.
sometimes rehab seems like the only way out.
so much shit held back, i need to let it all out.
when i said down the road, not across the street, i wasn't fuckin around.
with all these roads and streets, my arm is a map of the fuckin town.
my use of word is terrible,
the rhymes are unbearable.
i read this shit, and just want to die.
i can't express what i'm feelin inside.
i suck at writing, but i just can't stop.
i need to put it all down, let the pen drop.
but when i drop the pen, i'll pick up the knife.
and head back to, the cycle of my life.
i don't even have it bad, that's the bad thing about it,
i just do all this shit, and can't seem to quit.
day by day, night by night.
every single second is a constant fight.
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not finished. i may never finish it. i don't even know.
Written September 19th, 2005
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This rhyme flows ever so smoothly.Execellent job. I must applaud. I haven't been on here in forever but that's all over with I'm back. Sorry I brought you to this site and kinda just left you here. I've been going through all kinds of shit lately but I'm back just remember that. Drop me a line when you find the time. I'm really looking forward to bleeding with you sometime in the near future. And for the record, this poem is the shit whether you believe it or not. I'm very impressed......
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FANTASTICALLY WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!! I am so with you on it.. I'm falling in love with your writing! Keep up the excellent work. Hope you gain inspiration from my works as I do from yours.
*hugs*
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