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Goodbye Takes Forever

Missing image
The man in the moon is crying
the stars have lost their glow
I gave my heart so willingly
without thinking I let it go

Sharing a beautiful friendship
we still love each other so
but we keep hidden within
what is not allowed to show

You have many other obligations
though you tell me you still care
so our feelings are tucked away
it's become more then I can bear

It is still so hard to let you go
your words still echo in my mind
we struggle to maintain a friendship
leaving the love we shared behind

I can not see clearly in the distance
the images look cloudy and gray
can friendship stand the test of time
will it be too hard for me to stay

I have never regretted loving you
you loved me before I loved you
why did you steal my heart away
why did I fall in love with you


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Written September 19th, 2005

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  • theXmadXhatter
    October 3, 2007

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    This poem made me cry. My boyfriend and I broke up a week and a half ago. We broke up a couple days after our 1 year. This is kind of how I feel. It says you wrote this on September 19th..that was me and his anniversary except you wrote this a year before we started dating. I miss him so much. This was an amazing write. Keep up the great work.
    love your ap daughter
    aka:marissa rae