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One Night With You

In the winds of tonight
I wander over to your door
You hear a phallus knock
Open the gateway to lust
I caress your face
Accepting the invitation
You allow me your wine-soaked kiss
Absorbing my gilded lips you desire
This moment of wine lasts for eternity
Locking our lips and never to unbind
I allow your hand to run through my hair
You allow mine to caress your shoulder

Our lips release and I gently osculate your right cheek
Like an angel you moan to the warmth and sensual feeling
You then start to undress me in the darkness
I took you to the other side and start to undress you
As for this last piece of string
We kiss before you fall upon the bedside
You allow me entry in your cavern
As I thrust, you wail in excitement
I gaze into your beautiful eyes
And you prolong the screams
In the awakening of the moon fall
You let out one last, orgasmic wail

As I release from your cavern, the sweat deteriorates
You gaze into my face with a beautiful simper
I return the favor with a nocturnal kiss
Caressing my back you touch my wrist in satisfaction
The night is about to retreat in audacious lullabies
I help you arise into my arms, we embrace in the arms of romance
And as the epilogue lyrics of a record ends
I see you smile as I look into your eyes
To say farewell to this moment in life would be a sin
For you are my horny angel, writing a swansong is harsh
You remove from my arms and stroll over to the window
And we embrace until the moon's fall is elaborated

Author notes

This 'night' did not really happen to me. Not in reality anyway. I was thinking of the woman portrayed in this poem, the one whom I love. And I imagined the perfect way to lose my virginity to her. It is more amazing when you read this poem for the first time. Enjoy...
Written September 19th, 2005

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  • burning-rose
    May 20, 2008
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    Now I know who the woman or should I say girl is


  • heart and soul
    July 31, 2006
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    well done....well worded and a nice flow....though a few parts jump out of that flow.
    Well done and nice dream

    Liv


  • Malabu
    November 1, 2005
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    well this has a makings of a movie.......wishful thinking.....imagine.....something like this knocking at my door and a erotic tenor take hold of my physical enchanted being..... .....vivid thoughts run rampant but my fantasys still hold steadfast......I wish I wish.....just like you...lol
    loved the fantasy....very much....
    Malabu


  • Ambrosiah
    November 1, 2005
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    i really like this poem...makes me kinda....*cough*..yeah...LOL...but thanks for entering my contest...and good luck


  • Heartofacircle
    September 28, 2005
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    LOL just what I was thinking dori..but yes that one is a sweet one and so intimate with the person that this person is with. and so much meaning to it, I will say, thanks for sharing this, good job!


  • lost-and-confused
    September 19, 2005
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    aww.. that's sweet! it'd be even sweeter if it ws for real though! lol.. great job!~~~~~~~Jamie

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