I feel it every day
I just can’t get away
This burden I carry
This unbearable weight on my shoulders
It never goes away
Its always lingering around me
Making sure I never get too happy
Like a bubble over my head
That pops if I reach happiness
And I'm back to being depressed
I'm getting sick and tired of it
I know others are sick of dealing with me too
It makes having me as a friend no fun
I'm someone people now dread being around
Like being my friend is now a job or punishment
Eventually Ill lose all my friends one by one
Until I don’t have any left
Ill be all alone yet again
Left with nothing to live for
And so ill have to say goodbye
Author notes
I know it sucks, especially the last line but oh well, I dont care
Written September 19th, 2005
A contest entry
- Whatever You Want by StarvingAuthor.
300 points, ended October 21, 2005, 32 entries
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wow hailey this is really good...i liked it alot..i kno exactly how u felt in this one.....it doesnt suck at all...it was really good great emotion in it....great write i luv reading your poems....
much love
lacey -
this absolutely does NOT suck. It's wonderful! I actually feel that way right now. I understand. Keep penning, it helps.
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wow thats good better then anything i've written dont say your writings suck cause they dont kk i'm gonna read all the others now
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Hey being your friend does not suck! I'll still be your friend even if you have noone else. hell everyone hates me anyway I have to keep what few friends I've got.
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Hey hailey that would be funny to see you in a pink shirt an khakis lol. But you shouldn't say stuff like that i hope thats just how you get ur feelings out. well got to go ttyl
love ya Ashley -
Hailey.Don't speak of things like that,saying goodbye.I've already lost one friend i sure as hell don't want to lose anoter like that.I love you and i love talking to you,you know you have me if no one else is there.You are too much of a great person to lose.Promise me that you will call me if ever you get too down and there is no where else to turn.I've been there and i know what it's like.Love ya Hailey.
Edited on Sep 19, 4:28 p.m. because ''. -
id like to see you try
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It does not suck!! Quit saying that about everything or I'll have to make you wear a bright pink shirt with preppy khakis.
Love you,
Mom
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