Violate my inner core right into my soul
Burn my flesh with inner passion, swallow me whole
Crimson streaks upon my flesh, your own brand on my skin
Cold links of desire, lashes of bliss to aid us in our sin
Cries of love and lust anew, bound to your passion
Under your rule, your dominance, no other fashion
Lash of lightning upon my back, my ultimate pleasure
until you near to enter the tight embrace of my treasure
Constricted, violated; breathless moans for you
Screams to keep you satisfied, the love we both renew
Rippling waves of bliss ripping through each vein
Arching limbs that you own, the body that you maim
Yours forever, yours to keep, to love and to hate
Clawed, whipped, bound, and broken; you own my fate
The love I hold so dear and true, twisted in my mind
Loving every moment of it, my body, yours to bind
Nothing will change my demented ways as long as you live
Nothing could ever replace the unique love that which you give
Author notes
I was kind of thinking of Rose and Sharazon when I wrote this...but then again, maybe kind of of Helen as well.
Sharazon and Helen are Opaque Beauty's characters.
Written September 19th, 2005
In a list
- Erotica (Poetry) • next in list
- My Characters Along With Others • next in list
- The Sharazon Chronicles • next in list
- Bdsm • next in list
A contest entry
- Embracing The Shadows by XxSephirothxX.
500 points, ended November 7, 2005, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 14 of 14
-
Oooh, yeah, I can see how this could have possibly been about Hell.
The last two lines really make me thing that. ~Nodnodnod.~ But, it's not about her, now is it!? 
Yush, yush. This is a wonderful little poem, love. ♥ I rather enjoyed it, because, as Seven said, it rhymed!
And, unlike Seven, I adore rhyme. 
Rofl.
UHHH'... I don't know what else to say. e e;;
Eye hart ewe.
-
AH! RHYME! X_X; I'm totally kidding. Please don't throw those sharp things at me.
I was actually pleasantly surprised at how well this flowed. Rhyme, in general, gets on my nerves. I think it's usually because you see it in cutesy, short-lined poems. You actually manage to create a hot little scene AND tell us about the person enjoying it. I likes. *waggles eyebrows*
-
-
I actually hate rhyme too...but sometimes my mind refuses to write anything else...if that makes sense.
-
-
Erotic rhyme is always worth a read and I enjoyed it a lot. Good rhyme and good content, not so sure of the flow though, I found it quite tricky to read smoothly aloud.
-
-
Violate my inner core right into my soul
Burn my flesh with inner passion, swallow me whole
Crimson streaks upon my flesh, your own brand on my skin
Cold links of desire, lashes of bliss to aid us in our sin
Cries of love and lust anew, bound to your passion
Under your rule, your dominance, no other fashion
Lash of lightning upon my back, my ultimate pleasure
until you near to enter the tight embrace of my treasure
Constricted, violated; breathless moans for you
Screams to keep you satisfied, the love we both renew
Rippling waves of bliss ripping through each vein
Arching limbs that you own, the body that you maim
WOW -
Thank you, my dear.
-
sinful and lovely
harsh, ultraviolent, lusty and evil - I love it. right up my alley, and this is from someone who generally doen't dig rhyming poems. sweet liitle sin serenade, dah'ln..thanks much. -
It's okay sweetie. I've been busy myself. Thanks for the comment. *hug8
-
wowie...its well done babe..srry i haven't been able to im you lately, i have been suppperly busy... much luvs
ur child
aj -
♥
-
I wub you my sweet halfling.
-me -
Thank you, darling.
Coming from you, who has experience, I think I did okay with it. 
Edited on Sep 19, 7:16 p.m. because ''. -
well this was an interesting read. I enjoyed it all the way through and look forward to more. keep up the great work.
Adding your comment:
1 - 14 of 14
