We all wave
in the grave
of listless moments.
The world
without
the chosen word:
would be L
Author notes
Written September 19th, 2005
A contest entry
- Nature or Metaphysical Poems - 20 Lines or Less by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended September 21, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow, brilliant. I mean it- this is really something that leaves us in a state of contemplation.
I hope you cam back to write! You add a lot to this site! -
Hello Spider that Smiles. It is the Holiday Season and I wanted you to know that one of your Friends at AllPoetry was thinking about you and hoping your Holiday season is full of Joy. Nearly impossible to get peace -- individual peace sure but Peace for the World seems nearly extinct. Ah but not to drone on about the troubles, instead, Cheers to you and yours and hoping 2007 brings more poetic webs from the Special Spider.
Peace
Lisa
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Ah Jules, you've again put the thoughts in motion and made the mind whirl. I've pondered this one awhile and find that "L" to mean many things to me. Very interesting and quite brilliant, I must say. Awesome
Blessings, Gypsy
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stars stars stars
well if this doesn't conjur thoughts up what does?
an enigma as lute already put it...obscure like the clouds that shook the tower of babyl...I'm still at thought, but as many skeptics would say, u seem smart cause i seem dumb.
i love it
chris
Edited on Sep 19, 7:23 p.m. because 'the boo boos arrived univited'. -
This is like mind food... makes you think.
Love seeing a post from you, you've been gone way too long.
Desiree
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well that it succint, as enigmatic woulds be without the chosen word...
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