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Fox is in the Hen House

Fox is in the hen house
Having his self a time
Farmer John moved to the city
So he could try to earn a dime

Wings and eggs don’t count much
When mega store sets the price
Goodbye to tranquil dirt roads
Hello to concrete vise

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Written September 19th, 2005

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  • Grunts Girl gold member
    September 24, 2007
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    i know this well after moving from
    the farm to the city!!!
    well done


  • Lara
    November 21, 2006
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    wow! that poem is put together so well.


  • Desire gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    You are to funny and I greatly enjoyed this piece~

    Miss you greatly and glad to be back safely~
    Best wishes to you always my friend~
    and much love~
    Desire


  • kotalu
    October 5, 2005
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    nice one! This is a little different for you-- most enjoyable!
    Hugs,
    Re


  • heygoo
    September 19, 2005
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    positive

    I love the concept. Just my cup of tea. How we all long for a simple life but are compelled by the ever increasing demand for money. heygoo

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