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The Queen of Gophers

Astonishing revulsion
Lurks deep within
Arctic hearts
Blinded by greed
Seeing the hunted

Reigning in darkness
Dining with pawns
Swiftly moving
In your kingdom
Of fear and death

Beware dear Queen,
For the cavalry is coming
And all that is known
Will be no more
And end up like that of our King

The comforts of loneliness
Awaken nightmares
Showing the reality
Of what you did
To our savior

Silently watched
As Death teases
And tempts with addictions
Knowing the solution is simple
As subjects awaken paranoia

Chaos waits for confession
Of what we already know
Within the intellect
We see the consistency lost
And pawns turn to knights

And the life lead
Broadens the mind into insanity
Furthering the actions from sanity
And the mistakes made
Shall be the downfall

Author notes

I'll let you guess who the poem is dedicated to. Still a work in progress. First posted on Sept. 19, 2005, this is the more recent version.
Written November 2nd, 2006

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  • Arconalos
    September 19, 2005
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    this is pretty good and most poems are writen at the spur of the moment. they contain the most raw emotion and heart flet honesty of the write. it is very good