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Stuck

sniffing the spray
getting high off the fumes
trying to forget
what was said between me and you
the days change
and the night fades
the music is on
and you let the sonnet play
counting the seconds
to the moment i die
there's no point
if i cant even try
your lying on my bed
and i see right through it
i can see all you've done
i can see the bullsh*t
I'm lost at this point
the trap is complete
your looking at me
your face written in defeat
this is a waste of time
i will never escape
i guess this is it
this is my fate
I'm such a fool for you
I'm stuck

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Written September 18th, 2005

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  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    September 18, 2005
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    awe my tomika, is everything okay? beautiful work again, but dont get high, please? lol. Your too cool for that shit...I love you . and I hope you realize not all love is bad because ours isn **frendship**