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Coming Of The Dawn

Silhouettes of enshadowed harems to the mist
Neverending to the wrath of desires
As the passing of all lost souls
Contemplating on the sullen mausoleum
Just to sense it all away
Welcome to the dawn of atrocity

Licking flames of pagan rites
The clashing of cadavrous weddings
For a fog clogs the pathway to the Depths
Because a seraph has gilded my psyche
I am grateful to the angelic renewal
Take me away in the dawn of the moonlight

Whispers of the diety echo of the blood-cold dusk
Questioning the acts of the bleeding roses
Putting Fate on tortured ice
Reddening the moonrise to mordant lies
For the deathwish is high in the nightsky
Loosing within the dawn of animosity

Flickers of ancient plagues to the sun
Veils of nocturnal lust for the darkness
Lips swabbed in the sapphire wine
Until the end of all things to come
I die in your sacrificial place
I rest with the dawn of the moonrise

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Written September 18th, 2005

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  • Deiago
    January 5, 2006
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    What can I say!!!!!!!!!! Brilliant


  • Valley of Echoes
    September 18, 2005
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    This also left me speechless... the imagery that came to my mind was amazing and new, it was almost a euphoric trip of words. I love the touch of paganism around it, words and descriptions like moonlinght, sacrificial place, the nature indications... just love it. Fantastic.

    VOE


  • SixtySevenMustang
    September 18, 2005
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    COOL. I had to re-read it because it was so deep!!
    Speechless because this was so... awesome!!
    Great write!!
    much love,
    Kat