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sunshine

the sun runs down like rain through the leaves
dappling the ground beneath
mottling the grass in shades of green
the children run by us laughing at le chien
and the sun washes over us like a warm shower
as we lay in each others arms on the hill.

baby, you are my sunshine.

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Written September 17th, 2005

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