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I'm not going to explain how this came about, but I consider this some great Dadaism. 80 years too late.
Written September 17th, 2005

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  • grannyeri gold member
    October 1, 2005
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    As long as it means something to you, it must be profound or you would not have written this. Keep writing.


  • amandapoet15
    September 30, 2005
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    as? i'm confused. this was quite interesting i supposed. kinda retarded. but oh well


  • TrulyLoothy
    September 17, 2005
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    as? Um....ok?