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love for the first time

Licking, bitting, kissing thighs
Sucking, grabbing , o yeah its all mine
Theres this spot on me I know he knows
Cupid struck love with his arrows
Fucking, panting, it is a mess
Stroking, fingering, No more stress
Life is truly great as he enters me
Love is all that we can see
Bodys hot from desire
Moans, we are on fire
O,my god, O my god, the shouts
Fuck me, fuck me, in n out
Theres nothing better then to see his smile
As hes making love to me, the stream going for miles
Love, enjoyment and sexuality
This is how we express our love, in all reality
Forever in that one moment of time
Always wanting to do this sweet crime
This is the first time
It all started kissing thighs

Author notes

im baaack i just made this one. for the special someone
Written September 17th, 2005

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  • Ahkam silver member
    October 16, 2005
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    wonderful

    "It all started kissing thighs"
    this is an extraordinary beautiful concept...its really wonderful!!!!


    Edited on Oct 16, 4:39 p.m. because ''.


  • Ahkam silver member
    October 16, 2005
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    Coooool

    Hay hay! buddy...this is hot...i mean very straight expression...you are ...
    "Love is all that we can see"

  • lovemonkey
    September 17, 2005
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    This is a very good write I liked it and so did my husband


  • nokiddin08
    September 17, 2005
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    thank you so much!


  • kaymile
    September 17, 2005
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    hah, its very good! ..uhh happy you`re back.. and i like the rhymes. good job. -charli

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