In the midst of my dreams
I see your face
a soft tender kiss
a loving embrace
You hold me close
keep me safe at night
you are my Prince
my guiding light
Lovers by the fireside
kisses shared tastes like wine
two hearts possess a tender touch
on this night that means so much
As the full moon
rises in the night sky
we repeat our spell of love
for you and I have become one
~Lady Raven~
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Mushy in the morning
Written September 17th, 2005
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mum, this was amazing!
ahhh... What canI sayI love reading them
this was BRILIANTLY AMAZING!
Angel
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This applaud to! ~~Shannon~~
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Well I am whiping away tears. This is so sweet. I enjoyed it.
"You hold me close
keep me safe at night
you are my Prince
my guiding light" Dont we all want a prince to have and to hold. ~~Shannon~~ -
Beautiful.
Precious M'lady. very tender. What a precious soul you possess. Your heart yearns- and it will find...
Peace enchantress.
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i like it
very nice, it has meaning, love is deep and sometimes hurtfull, but real. -
nice
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Beautiful! So much passion for words! It left me speechless! Great job! I applaud you!
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that was very lovely and i really liked it
so simple and so beautiful
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Awwww the sweet caress of dreams and emotions and heart felt memories blended into the perfect melody of a poem serenity fills her heart with passions kiss and the bliss of her enchantment sets the heart free from sin in the realm of sovernty and mystical spells which so many fail to understand.this is very beautifully penned and brilliantly put into motion with elegance and you can hear your voice echoing in the back ground of loves sweetest embraces my sweet vampy..
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very cute and too the point
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It was good but I'm not much in the mood to leave lots of comments...
later
Romeo -
A love is a poem.
It is the music of love. It is the melody of love.It is the story of love and also it is the internal to eternal travell through the bliss of love too. The thoughts are so soft and so innocentely stated that is just marvelous. The heartfelt emotions are the base of the write which is just very impressive and create a magic of a peculiar kind covered with the wine of love thoughout. I am really impressed with the flow of thiw work and the feel of his work too. I really appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar -
Aww thanx Prince Charming
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I have 2 collections that I truly love to write in. My Fantasy and my Past Life Loves. And actually, shhhhh dont tell, but most of the Past Life Loves are visions of my Past Life Loves. I am glad you enjoyed this piece hun.
Huggles, Lady Raven -
This is good. Not mushy at all. I like this, my lady. Well written and well worth an applause.
Adrian -
Excellent
I love this poem! It's amazing because I can just imagine two lovers sitting by the fireside... And their kisses, you can litteraly taste them. Bravo! I loved the imagery! -
Aaaaawh, I'm a sucker for love lol!!, so this was amazing, very nice picture. Awesome job hun, and can't wait to read some more.
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Yes it is kind of mushy and if thats what you set out to do, you have done it, personally I'm not into such sentimantal stuff.
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hmmm how sweet, and honest this one is and how i can relate. very nice job. keep it up
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