Surprised by Grace ~
unexpected kindness
soothing in words'
empathic intent
answering heart's
newly noticed
need
Author notes
"It is when you give of yourself that you truly give."
"It is well to give when asked, but it is better to give unasked, through understanding;"
~ Khalil Gibran
Written September 17th, 2005
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so very sweet and precious. I could tell the two of you had something special!!
Kari -
A just reward
Well written, I can feel the warmth of suseann's writing in your words. jono -
This is really beautiful, sweet and very true..
i love suseann
keep on writing
Nooni -
Beautifully Penned!
Dearest suseanne carrol,
I especially love this heaven sent (acrostic) so beautifully penned just for the heart of you. Such tender beauty in truth. Maatkara is the essence of the Lords eternal poetry seeds. This is poetry in motion soaring in tender love, friendship and devotion. Without Maatkara’s love and divine caring, I would be lost here on allpoetry.com. Utterly beautiful in content and poetic beauty. You have found a true friend in her tender soul weaving you into heavenly wings of gold. Delightful Colours… A rush to the soul ensoul. Namaste Blessed Be to you and yours eternally~
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A swallow fine flew to my room
as I was in my gloom
she swept my heart with such delight
her tale a tiny broom
And suddenly the dust did dance
by chords I never knew
the specks was caught in rays of love
as light embraced the blue
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To pay lasting tribute to one you love by sharing a creation from your own heart, you are a blessing. Each line, even in its brevity speaks a multitude of emotions.
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Wow Maatkara!! Great job.
Its so sweet 
A lovely gesture!!!
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I think that this is a wonderful piece. I have recently been acquainted with suseann and she is a very kind person. I am glad to see that you have dedicated such a wonderful piece to a wonderful soul! Keep up the great work...oh, and I think that everyone can relate to the first two lines!
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Thank you so much! What a lovely thing to say, I appreciate that very much.
~G
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After viewing your page and a couple of your works I felt obliged and honored to add you to my favorites that only consist of two at this time. Your depth of understanding is awesome and a source of great inspiration.
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this was a amazing poem, I love it maat very original and very from deep inside great work on this, I always love these types of poems, I wish i only had your talent, great work again
sincerly Mortikie
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Very nice tribute to someone close. You have decorated the background so wonderfully too. Enjoyed the read,
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I love you Maat! You're awesome. I'm putting that somewhere where everyone can see. Today is turning out to be an awesome day
~Sey -
Thank you, Sey
How's this:
Sweet soul
Endearing
Young
Lovable
Obliging
Responsible
Enthusiastic
Never mean
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Awwww! Maat, you're the coolest. This was such a nice thing to do for a friend. I wonder how I'd go about getting you to do one of these for me? Oh well, it was absolutely beautiful Maat Such kindness for a kind friend.
~Sey -
Now I feel I must go meet this person -
A tribute from you is always a gift and this one is lovely!
You are a great friend to many!
Susan -
Oh this is beautiful. Suseann is truly a sweetheart and one of my very best friends. Thank you for writing this for her. This background is awesome too. Well done!
~Lyrical
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a beautiful poem. those lines of gibran are a great compliment to be attributed to a person
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This is lovely, and true to my small experience of suseann. The unexpected kindness of strangers lightens our burdens. Likewise, our small kindnesses can make a big difference.
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Oh,thank you sweetheart.I'm surprized and flattered at this purdy thing! I know heartaches too.It just helps sort things out a little when someone listens.Love ya kiddo!~~Suseann P.S.I'm pretty much always here,if ever.
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