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To a Dear Friend

You Are a Dear Friend of Mine
Who's Been There For Me For Years
So I Write This to Tell You
Something I've Long To Speak
Thank You For Your Friendship
That I Hold Dear To My Heart
Now You Are Gone
So Far Away
But Are Friendship Stays Strong
I Miss You Deary
For a Great Friend You Are
That I Love With All My Heart
So The Day Till You Come Home
Forever You'll Be Missed!


To:Bobby! Miss You!

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Written September 16th, 2005

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  • Am8ur
    March 1, 2007
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    hi chicken, i was just wondering, the 6th line from the bottom reads "But Are Friendship Stays Strong" i was just thinking it would be better if ARE was replaced wit OUR
    anyways. it is another beautiful write. well done.
    Til


  • xoxsugarhixox
    February 16, 2006
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    Good job. This reminds me of my friend Victor. Hes in the army. Actually he is coming to visit tomorrow before he goes back out. So at least I get to see him for a few hours. Keep up the good work.


  • z etoile
    October 15, 2005
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    Hey great job.... Its hard when parting from someone close

  • Dark Eagle
    September 16, 2005
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    Thank you Mia I <3 you!

    Oh Mia I miss you and everyone else back home! I miss you all so much! I LOVE YOU ALL YOU ARE THE BEST FRIENDS ANYONE COULD EVER ASK FOR!!!