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There Is No Other

There's Something I Must Say
To You The One I Love,
For You I Love so Deeply.
Nothing May Change That Feeling
There Is No Other
That Can Replace
The Months Of Love
You Have Giving Me.
If Not For You
I Wouldn't Be Here Today
Writing My Love to You
There Is No Other Like You
So With All The Love I Have
To My Heart You Have
The Key To Whats Locked Inside.
There Is No Other For Me.

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Written September 16th, 2005

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  • Am8ur
    March 1, 2007

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    you really are a beutiful writer. you are a talented girl. well done again.
    i am sorry you are probbly not gonna like me much lol, i am trying to be helpful but.... the 8th line from the top reads ... "You Have Giving Me." should GIVING read GIVEN?
    anyways. keep on writing.
    Til