Blood Stains
Sliver Chains
My life has come and gone
and thats my fault
can't take it back
don't know how to act
Porcline face
covering the bruises
trying to hind the scars
the pain can be forgotten
the tears wiped away
but i still have to see the scars
i still have to deal
couldn't take the pain
couldn't stop the bloodd
one was to deep to stop
wishing GOD was real
unlike every bunny tear
hinding undera mask
my whole life is now an acted
the word ALONE is on my leg
cause thats how every thing will stay
it can never be the same
Blood Stains
Sliver Chains
all this pain
can't go away
Author notes
ALONE!
Written September 16th, 2005
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lots of little errors. But other than that i loved it! great job.
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wow this takes my breath awya every time i read it stasier i love it more every time this is so good i love it and look i finally commented lol well luv ya lots BYE!!!!!!!!!!~lissa~
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I liked this poem. the last few lines reminded me of a song by Korn this was an awesme poem keep up the good work. ttyl ~Ja~
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thaxs i wrote it at ur house about when you went to asleep when you woke up i was done writing it LOL love ya
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I have FATE in my arm thaxs for the comment
ttyl..l8er
~Asia~ -
sry about the spelling errors but im a really bad speller and this poem meant alot so i wanted it to stay the same even if it was wrong so yeah sry through
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WOW this is so flippin awesome i love it so gonna be a fav!!!
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wow this is awesome, i love it. your such a great writer
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wow.....that was awesome. the title caught me attention. "Blood Stains and Silver Chains" vair catchy.
and i can really relate to it. i put.....HATE in my arm. yeah.....well anyways i hope you keep up the good work. you're AMAZING. and NOT ALONE! 
i'll talk to you later girl.
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it was hard to read cuz of all the spelling errors but it was pretty good.not too long either i like that keep it up
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