I'm sick of you
You don't understand me
You say your not pushing me
And its all about love
I'm sick of excuses
Its all bullshit
I'm tempted to kill you
You want to change me
Well I wont let it happen
Author notes
this guy has jus pushed me to my last nerve.
Written September 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- lets get good with being happy.......... by angaus.
300 points, ended September 27, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
Excellent
Its powerful and the emotion it capture is very touching. Its good be who you are, one thing i will let you know be not no body else -that is do not conform into another person just to please them. But at the same time we have to be considerate about others, how do they feel about us, why do they feel and say and do the things they do, why do the want to us to change. Is'it for a good reason. It Might be for our good, maybe something bad or that isn't fit or helping us in a positive way and they are asking for a change in that area of our life or activity for our benefit because they really do care.
You don't have to change your whole life to fit theirs just that aspect, you yourself have to look, think about what exactly they are asking and see if its really asking you to change you whole life and become somebody else who is not the real you anymore OR are they asking to change just a particular way or activity that is negative, you decide.
Just let know one forcce you or presurize you into something you are not, you have a choice and a free will to be yourself and whoever you want to be.
In life it is inevitable not to face the question of change and conformity, it will always be right in front of us but it is up to our good judgement to say is this thing right or wrong is it suited to me are they true or not is it for their own gain or for my gain.
Wonderful and enjoyed reading .
Edited on Oct 02, 4:48 p.m. because 'Wrong words and others'. -
two thunbs up and a foot.
you have very strong character and spirit....I have learnt in life to use this for a better outcome. One day my fight in me stopped and I physically became unwell. I still have strentgh but the drive is not phsyically possible any more to push the limits. Please use it well it's a scary place to be when you find yourself on the floor when you were trying to help some-one who desperatley needed it but all my phsical reserve had been used on things that would of eventually faded away anyway.
I wish you all the best I ADMIRE PEOPLE WHO STILL HAVE THAT IN THEIR SPIRIT. God bless you sweetheart...you have a beautiful talent -
good ... dont ever let anyone change you.. be you for you not some one else for some one.... great job... and it isnt love if they are trying to change you if they loved you they would love you for you ... and wouldnt want to change anything about u at all... great job
Adding your comment:
2 old applause
