Each time I kiss
My sweet miss, it's
True bliss indeed
For more plead I
She heeds my plea, with sighs does comply
She stirred my heart
From the start,she's
A part of me
Vitally mine
Will be evermore my Valentine.
Author notes
Written September 16th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- The Contest To End All Contests by .
300 points, ended March 24, 2006, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Kiss by strangerforeigner.
405 points, ended September 5, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
great
-
ok, all together now: aaaawwwww. I like the way you parsel out your words, as if you only have so many with which to breath life into such a deep subject. You just brushed the surface, but managed to hint at so much more. Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
-
Now, this is perfect...very well done. I thought you'd enjoy this form since you like this still of form...the than bauk I think it's called. Thanks for entering.
SAm
-
Very sweet and nicely expressed with tenderness. Love, Me
Adding your comment:
