it's in her kiss
the love she has
is breathless as it's carried on the wind
sent to his lips to share
with her lips they share their sweetness
no other two have ever felt
the way these two resless souls feel rite now
but in time the world will see
that they were meant to be intertwined by a love so devine that they make the angels cry
robert bolin - every other line starting with the first one
vampira1665 - every other line starting with the second one
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this was fun
Written September 16th, 2005
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. this was so beautiful!
I love reading this one...... ahhh..... very romantic....
luv yah mim
Angel
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This is really romantic. Thank you once again. ~~Shannon~~
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i like this - romantic and full of emotional love. amazing!
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Very pretty!
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Oooh! Very beautiful! Felt like I just got my "kiss" for the day!
Beautiful work!
Uh.. by the way, I think you're missing an "e" in this one here --> "no other two have ver felt"
I think you dropped your "e". So I thought I pick it up and return to ya!
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