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Andy your a star



Some where in the sky you now fly
your daughters dreams hidden behind
sore eyes that cry.

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"But daddy's too strong to drown,
why do you say he will no longer be around?"

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Sleeping sound in the scent of his clothes
two little girls missing dad and it shows.

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Off the jetty they threw flowers into the sea,
smiling because it was special so innocently.

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I'm so sorry my Tab & La La that your daddy has gone,
Auntie is here and always will be forever on.

~

Love is always Enough

Author notes

It's the pain.....pain in our own hearts and the pain in others that feels so suffocating.
Written September 16th, 2005

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  • October 31, 2005
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    wow, dont come here much anymore, bit like yaself. Sad times. Nice thoughts though.


  • spirited
    September 20, 2005
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    beautiful words that mean as much to me as anyone who has lost someone. he will be proud of your words.


  • whispersoftly
    September 16, 2005
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    OMG that is soo wonderful obviously a really bad time hope all of You are well and i pray that it gets better for you all beatifully written well done xx huggggggggs for your nieces thought im sure they need it from their daddy!