Something takes a part of me
i hope its my heart that you see
another second that passes by
i love you more and why cant i
be the one to be with you
while the sky is still blue
and the sun still shines bright
for your love i hold so tight
if i had 1 More day to live
to you my heart i would give
cause i love you more each passing day
you always seem to take me away
to the stars where they shine
for that day will be mine
and when my dream comes true
hope fully it will be with you
cause i dreamt of you and me
under the stars and above the sea
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Written September 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- I just want some poetry.... by WrapMeUpTight.
300 points, ended September 21, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very beautiful! and emotional... i like it. Keep it up!
bravo! -
wow this is a very emotional write....beautifully written but what lines did you use? Let me know....great write
always
Bridget
XoXo
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