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You've Lost It

Tears weep from those solemn eyes,
A lost hope lays dormant in desolate cries,
Your soul is burning as you smell the smoke,
Digging for truth from the words you spoke.

And now you've lost it,
What it was that made you whole.
You've lost it,
The hunger now haunts your soul.
You've lost it,
Now everything makes you sad;
Because you've lost it,
You've lost all you ever had.

The monster grows inside your numb, brittle frame,
Knowing deep inside you will never be the same.
Watching the reflection in the mirror grow dark,
The emptiness consumes your shattered heart.

And now you've lost it,
What it was that made you whole.
You've lost it,
The hunger now haunts your soul.
You've lost it,
Now everything makes you sad;
Because you've lost it,
You've lost all you ever had.

Now it is gone, it is just too bad,
That you've lost all you ever had...

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Written September 12th, 2005

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  • BloodyTears13
    September 16, 2005
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    Hey this is a great set of lyrics. A wonderful use of words. I like it alot. It would make a great song.