tell me I'm beautiful
and beauty is not
a lemon rind spritz
of impulsive credibility
tell me I'm worth it
and worth is not
little golden coins
in goblin banks
tell me I'm courage
tell me I'm fire
and tell me you would burn
for one instant of a touch
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Written September 16th, 2005
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best poem ever
it says so much in so little. it had an extremely nice flow, and the wording was just....amazing. i don't think i've read anything this good or powerful in a long time. it's superb! i really enjoyed reading it. you have talent! for srs! keep up the fantastic work, babes!
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I'm glad you liked it.
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lovely
I think that you are talking about a love that is real, not infatuation where someone sees you and is struck with attraction and thinks you're worth a million dollars.
To this one you are deserving real love, a real live, personal, and even a spiritual love. That one would die just for a moment with you because that is the moment they were truly alive.
That is my understanding, that is the way I prefer to understand it. This is beautiful and should have a beautiful meaning to it. -
You are my most beautiful consummation, blessed with
an aura that grows under the suns crystal shadows
reflecting in the mirrors of aging eyes.
You are more worthy than life itself, as valued with
the ring of my arms that wraps eternity now
in an endless core of being everywhere here.
You are the spark, the fuel, and the burn
that has lovingly scorched not just my living soul,
but many living souls.
I do burn my heart out for you,
for your touch, for you.
Loving you dangerously,
Your furious other & burning desire -
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*reads*
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*reads again*
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*hugs him tightly*
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