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I woke up one morning

Today,
There was no...
No thoughts of shiny knives dancing in my head.
No pleas to God to strike me dead.
No hoping the world would end tomorrow.
I marveled...I actually wanted to live.







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I stuggle with depression sometimes.
Written September 15th, 2005

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  • cristion girl co 08
    June 2, 2006
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    wonderful

    This was a wonderful piece of work it was passionate and attention grabbing what a poem should be emotional


  • Amethystdawn2058
    October 9, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind comments.


  • October 6, 2005
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    beautiful, absolutely beautiful write. Shows excellent passion..Farewell, Lost Crow Child


  • TanitaP
    September 16, 2005
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    great piece, reminds me of how I used to be before I got pregnant Iloved it