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1,2,3

live



your



life

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i think this is pretty good.
Written September 15th, 2005

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  • nichtmich silver member
    September 17, 2005
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    Very Good

    A profound statement. Strong and true. I think it's great !!!


  • leander Moderators member
    September 16, 2005
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    Everyone has to be able to live their life exactly the way they want to live it... unfortunately there are many things out there who can destroy these dreams...
    Best of luck!

    Leander