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must  

          you

     love







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this is the best thing i can think of and i think its pretty good.
Written September 15th, 2005

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  • secret fountain
    September 18, 2005
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    holy fu** that as aweseom you now the showing love thing. i could never do that even if i would try. ho


  • leander Moderators member
    September 16, 2005
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    The order the words appeared sound a little bit strange to me, but that's maybe because English isn't my maternal language... I'd rather think it should be 'you must love' however, could be wrong


    Leander


  • ShadowStalker
    September 15, 2005
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    Wow. This means so many things to so many different people. Gppd luck in the contest, you have a good choice of words here.