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For Juan

Pull me gently
to the back of your mind
where sex is like breathing
when love is the air
and lust is the satin
that lays on the bed
crumpled under bodies
desire in knots
of spider legs
and sweaty skin
of slick shimmer
in candle light glow
flickering dances
onto the wall
where hell is just fire
heaven just clouds
and life is just figures flying
fingers flitting
breath beating
bodies melting
into satin
and candle wax
drips

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Written September 15th, 2005

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