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Holding On..

you're holding on so close to the edge,
nothing left to live for,
no reason to survive,
your life a spider-web of lies,
or so to you it seems so true,

-not finsihed--soz bout this, but i havnt been on much lately xxx

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Written September 15th, 2005

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