Oh my goodness, gracious me,
I `bout missed a friend's birthday.
Hope the party's still going on,
and the birthday girl's isn't gone.
Hey there Patty, there you are,
wish you the best, hope you go far.
May God bless you everyday,
His Spirit move when you pray.
Hugs and kisses, presents too,
hope they all are given you.
Most of all I wish you well,
how old are you, I won't tell?
Happy Happy
Birthday,
and
God bless you!
Author notes
Hope you have a blessed day!!!!!!!!!!!!
Written September 15th, 2005
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A contest entry
- 24 HOUR CONTEST. Just 24 hours... by raspberry.
303 points, ended September 21, 2005, 7 entries
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Sam, this is just so wonderful. I am a marvelous 48 and very proud of it! Thank you so much for this sweet poem. I smiled the entire way through it. Hugs, Patricia ♥
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WOw.. Am late in reading this and late in judgin this too.. But as u said.. the party will still go on..
And the bday girl should be enjoying this equally 
Thanks Sam for ur love as usual and lovely words that rock the page 
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Wishing her the best.
I must say Happy Birthday to her too and last Saturaday was mine. But I know she is delighted to receive such a lovely present. -
This is an absolutely delightful birthday greeting! It is so very clever how you managed to blend the perfect combination of genuine sincerity and humour. It reads so nice as well...just kind of bounces off the tongue. Great job and best of luck in the contest to you! ~Karen~
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Sam, Very sweet and thoughtful, Happy birthday Pattyann ♥ Sherry
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A wonderful poem and lovely cake!!
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Sam, this is a lovely Birthday gift, Good luck.
Hugs Joan
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