If someone told you they loved you,
Would you be happy, or wishing it was me?
If someone told me they loved me,
I would be happy, yet delighted if it was you!
If I was not two years older,
Would you feel the way I do for you?
If I was two years older,
I would make it my ambition to be with you!
If only we was Born at different times,
Would I then be able to make you mine?
If only we could be together,
I would be in love with you for ever!
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Written September 15th, 2005
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gd poem
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Thanks
I'm glad you liked my poetry. You are a great talent yourself. I think this poem has a lot symetry (I don't know if
I splled it correctly) and depth. I like i a lot and gonna give you your props. -
Hiya Sam thanxz babe! He is 2years older than me his is 18 and we are now together well we have been for a week 2day
How are you?
You got a boyfriend?
Missing you luv sarah xxx -
Hiya Stace,
Thanxz for the comment babe I know sorrey I wish I did still have it I am trying to make me dada lwet me have it back though! -
Lovely Sarah. But I am kinda confused. Is he older than you or younger than you?!
Samantha xxx -
OMG...This is so beautiful!
noo....U dont have msn anymore!!??
We will have to chat on here and write to eachother..
Love ya
Love Stace xoxo
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