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Why does no one ever say








SORRY!

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Written September 15th, 2005

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  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    September 19, 2005
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    Thank You.
    I'm glad you appreciated it.
    Jim S

  • All-is-Well
    September 19, 2005
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    LOL! Good one !

  • heartnsoul
    September 16, 2005
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    Excellent

    Tears welling in her eyes, "Ohhh Jim!!" Reaching up to him as she hugs and plants sweet little kisses on his cheeks "I'm sorry too! Can we make up now?"

    LOL! You must know how good it feels being a woman to hear a man finally say that!! All kidding aside, without actions to back up the word, it becomes just that, a word. Strange, how this one word can be heartfelt. Yet, take away the sincerity, and it becomes cold and empty of meaning.

    You know, like your comment says, I wonder how many contestants would have used it?
    Good luck in the contest.
    ~Michelle~

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    Hi Cap'n,
    If you are in the UK then come to Otley Folk Festival this weekend and you just might hear me do it!!
    Thanks for reading.
    Jim S

  • captain splat
    September 15, 2005
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    Good

    I can just imagine you standing in front of a large crowd as they wait quietly to hear this poem. Short but to the point.
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