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Fire Me Up

C'mon and strike the match for my eternal flame
Let me burn up into the night sky to-night
I'm waiting on you to play this game
Let's go and burn up in a shining light!

Just go and fire me up
fire me up
burn my soul into a blaze!

I wanna rise up into the atmosphere
and spark my soul in space!

Come on and light my heart
light my heart
Strike it into a roaring flame!

I'm ready to rise up like the sun
I want you to feel the same!

So watch the fire, it's rising up fast
as I take you along with my Burning Soul
This feeling I have to erupt and blast
as we both burn and lose control-ol!

Just go and fire me up
fire me up
burn my soul into a blaze!

I wanna rise up into the atmosphere
and spark my soul in space!

Oh, c'mon and light my heart
light my heart
Strike it into a roaring flame!

I'm ready to rise up like the sun
I want you to feel the same!

Burn burn burn burn, my burning fantasyyy
Rising flames, shooting up, come on and dance with me!
Oh oh oh
Burn burn burn burn, my burning ecstacyyy
We're gonna erupt, going to roar, just wait and see!

Fire me up, fire me up, fire me up!

Author notes

This is a song!!!  It's a fast-paced techno style lyrics, and if anyone can make a good beat to it then please let me hear it!  I hope that you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it down and singing to myself.  Inspired by random DDR music, I felt compelled.  w00t!  -Dan
Written September 15th, 2005

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  • AdaraRedGoddess
    January 31, 2008
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    Adorable!

    When I read your notes it made a LOT of sense. The words and phrasing lend itself to being accompanied by music. I have to admit that techno stuff is not really my style of music, but I'm sure that if you found a good beat for this I would at least be willing to listen to it with an open mind.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    September 18, 2005
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    these lyrics definitely need music with a quick beat to it
    the words are very simple with frequent repeats but it's perfect for the right type of music.
    nicely done


  • hot babe30
    September 18, 2005
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    wow
    this is an awesome piece
    i reeeeally liked it
    you could use a little help but
    great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    much luv,
    aby

  • Bronwen Eckstein
    September 18, 2005
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    Good song

    All you need for this is some good music. A great song.


  • Shakari
    September 18, 2005
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    OMG! I was all like...imagining it in a techno music version and then you said that DDR inspired you! LOL! Well, this piece is so awesome and it would rock with a techno-like keyboard in the backround...possible guitars and all that stuff. Ok, I will shut up and just say that this was awesome. I hope to hear this song on the radio as much as I have heard that Crazy Frog in Axel F song! LOL!

  • MollysWall
    September 18, 2005
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    Very energetic, I felt kind of a frenzied need to be with whoever this is being sung to. Like the song version of the absolute height of passion! I can really picture something like this on the alternative rock station! Well, I say great job and maybe someday we will be hearing from you on the radio...
    Best wishes
    ~Amy

  • Eric Nunnally
    September 18, 2005
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    A song, right? I like the energy of this piece... kind of manic, like someone zuited up on one of those super-caffeinated drinks. Keep up the good work, I'm sure everyone reading this got a charge out of it!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 18, 2005
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    A love is a poem.

    It is just full of musical emotions .The words are just dancing with the meaning of love and with the meaning of the impacat of love in the life of the poet. The emotions are very innocently presenting the virginity of the thoughts through annd through. THE FLOW OF THE WRITE IS VERY MUCH IMPRESSIVE AND JUST TO THE POINT. I REALLY APPRECIATE THIS WORK.Prabhudayal khattar


  • sweetbaby
    September 18, 2005
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    The repetition makes this so powerful! I love how you use fire. It's great. The lyrics are awesome this would make a fantastic song. Great job!


  • Gothic Cross
    September 16, 2005
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    you wrote this yourself? cool i'd love to sing and for a beat i could get someone in my band to do it.
    ~~~~ love joei!

  • SaveTheRice
    September 15, 2005
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    it kinda reminded me of rage against the machine but not all freaking political awesome write though


  • Wolf Dreamer
    September 15, 2005
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    *starts randomly dancing* I LOVE this!!! It's amazing.....well you wrote it and you write amazing things so I'm not surprised.


  • ImmortalTreason
    September 15, 2005
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    omg it rocks i love it it even has it s own beat it so good i love

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