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Day Daddy Dummed me

Daddy I adore you,
eleven days since I last saw you.
A hundred things I wanna say,
now I can't,
you've gone away.
There's nothing I can do,
but say I still love you.
and how everyday I seem to cry,
never really knowing why.
So I'll wander alone,
always hoping that you'll come home.
But for now I'll say goodbye.

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Written September 15th, 2005

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  • Jules1
    October 3, 2005
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    great write you write what you feel which is

    awww bless. dont worry honey im sure it will all be ok soon. im sure your dad will see how stupid hes being. and you know you can always speak to me. after all im now in a similar situation! Always hoping that it will be ok and sort itself out can help. you know thinking positive, yet being realistic i guess. neways i gotta go. love you! im always here for you and will stand by you, we can get through our probablems together i know. take care.
    love Jules xxxxxx