Art is born of pain
Pain the prophet of beauty
I am not afraid
Author notes
Written September 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- All Sorts of Options; prewrites welcome by DramaQueen469.
380 points, ended October 16, 2008, 24 entries
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Gorgeous!
I'm horrible at long comments on haikus... there's only seventeen freakin' syllables to talk about! Lol... So I will simply say:
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Yes, very explanative. If you are looking for a title, amy I suggest "Birth of An Artist." I think it wold su, up your piece well without being too repetitive. Nicely done.
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I love this, It's so short but so to the point! Especially since it's hard for some people to write haiku's, this one expresses sincerely how art is formed. I agree also, it is born of pain. Good write, i hope to read more of your work!
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Oh, this is, indeed, perfect, and the truth strikes the bone of all I write!
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Pain the prophet of beauty
-An interesting analogy. I caught your name off more5600's page. Please feel free to read any/all of my own stuff including my vast catalogue of my own haiku and senryu. I will definitely skim through more of your own work.-Curtis Meyer -
nice haiku, very well done. flawless
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Very nice haiku, if it wasn't for the first line I wouldn't even be writing. -Al
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