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Shakespearean Sonnet for HeavenScent4U

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Shattered mirrors lie in your dreams far gone
now in healing your days are better spent
where good luck has graced you with a new dawn
bringing you here to us as HeavenScent.


 

How you arrived this way few can discern
for your gladness you share without lament
and who would so dig to know you in turn
the way you comes to know them, HeavenScent?


 

The coyote’s lullaby echoes near
a sliver of moon between our embrace
lets me reawaken your passion here
as I had once your compassion and grace.


 

A simple request is all you desire-
that I stir the coals of your burning fires!





Author notes

This poem is for... guess who?
Pic by me- I guess you could call it
'A Flock of Hope Over a Shattered Landscape'!
Written September 15th, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    Glad you liked it, Jess! Things couldn't be any crazier!

  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    September 15, 2005
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    Wayne, you dis and dismiss me, but then you try to swoon my girl??? What's up with this???? Sigh; how did I know you would somehow most likely end up in bed with me some way or another; yes, Shell will be in the middle! LOL! Good luck!

    Jess


  • wbiro gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    Thanks, starhiker, now all I have to do is write her a song and sing it in my Frank Sinatra voice! lol


  • Starhiker
    September 15, 2005
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    Beautiful poem, wbiro. HeavenScent will love it for sure. You made a beautiful image too! You seem to quite an all-round artist. Good luck in the contest! Good rhyme and rythm, and good flow!