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Fallen

Curled up tightly in a little ball
All alone crying these tears of pain
Eating away my sorrows and shame
Trapped in this world filled with a disgusting plague.

No one to turn to , nor will love me so
not even my own blood, who has now become my foe
Washing away my sanity with every drop I make
How you can taste my pain and suffering. Can't you see this isn't fake?!

Holding on to my self being ,the only thing I can trust .
To be protected from your sins.
Nor devoured by lust .
Alone I shall stay , wrapped around the arms of dispair
Every petal has been plucked  , from this rose which was fair.

Broken heart that never mends
Bleeding wound which no one tends
Fallen child from up above
Can't you see ?! she wasn't loved .


















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Written September 14th, 2005

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