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Lyrical Soul's Poetic Anchor

A friend is one we truly value,
of this there is no doubt.
And I know this one gal who,
very seldom lets me down.

Her poet name is Lyrical Soul,
but I just sometimes call her Robin.
She's one southern bell who tolls-
true and never leaves me bobbin.

A poetic deep sea of form unknown,
she'll show me where I'm bound.
Never sure if poetically I've grown,
she turns poetic tides around.

Where would I be without her compassion,
sit adrift in a sea of writer's confusion .
Poetic ship would be sit adrift and crashin,
because poetic form I'm usually abusin.

             ~~Suseann~~






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Written September 14th, 2005

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  • OurxBeginning
    September 19, 2005
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    Awwwh, this is very sweet of you!, I really loved the layout, and emotions, it truly came from the heart, great job, and keep it up.

    ~MxR


  • Uticajohnson
    September 19, 2005
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    This is pretty cool ,Nice pic.


  • suseann
    September 18, 2005
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    I'll just bet you do,and then some.Thanks for commenting.


  • LostMyMind
    September 16, 2005
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    i feel the same way about the same person


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 15, 2005
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    AWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEE, this is so sweet!!!!!!!! I am so glad you put it back. I was thrilled when I saw it in my faves list and then so disappointed when I saw you had deleted it. This is so sweet. You are a dear dear friend. Love and hugs to you always!!!!!!!!!!

    ~Lyrical

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